In some cultures today, older people are enjoying their retirement from work by spending their money on themselves (e.g. on holidays) rather than saving the money for their children. Is this a positive or negative development?

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on recreation

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as holidays

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of saving for the future generation after becoming retired.

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there are admittedly several drawbacks, I advocate for those who believe that the positive influences of

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phenomenon are more considerable. On the one hand, numerous inherent problems stem from older

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’s expenditure on leisure activities and personal pursuits rather than preserving these funds for their children’s future. The most notable disadvantage of

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trend is that it can undermine mutual understanding between family members and eventually cause them to drift apart.

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vulnerability arises because youth cannot rely on their parents and they have to put a heavy burden on their shoulders with a view to earning

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.

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, they have a tendency to allocate an inordinate amount of

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to work, both at the office and at home, neglecting other family members and negatively impacting familial relationships.

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, considering that working

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constitutes approximately one-third of a person’s life, especially in the whole world that going through some sort of financial crisis, an unhealthy work-life balance renders

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who do not receive the transfer of wealth from their parents more susceptible to the deterioration of both mental and physical health.

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can lead to the delay of childbearing or

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up bearing the next generation

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or more importantly, these young

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may be infertile.

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, I am convinced that the aforementioned downsides pale in comparison with the significant upsides of the decision of retired

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to spend their hard-earned savings on their own leisure pursuits.

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trend is the self-reliance

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those teenagers.

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can be attributable to the fact that knowing that there will be no inheritance, adolescents must soon learn how to be independent and engage in employment to meet their basic needs.

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, they can get exposure to

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working environment, which can educate them about determination, patience and the lesson that nothing is free. A prime example of

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billionaire Bill Gates, he

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leave any fortune to his children because he

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to teach them about the value of

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earned from

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and tears,

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making those successors more mature and appreciate the

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of other

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point to discuss is that it may tighten the family relationship. Retired

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can devote their full

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and energy to engaging in more vacations with their family and loved ones. Increased

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more understanding between parents and children, which may gradually eliminate the generation gap existing in some families these days.

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but not least, the true gain is a pleasure

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years of stress and tiredness, these

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can be vulnerable to a myriad of health problems

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as hearing loss, back and neck pain, or heart disease.

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ease in life not only heals their mentality, but

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encourage them to embark on more physical activities that bring joy and

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with a view to reducing the risk of getting these diseases. In conclusion,

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it is undeniable that the decision of older

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for amusement rather than save it for their future heirs may be attributable to some drawbacks, I would contend that the advantages ultimately outweigh the disadvantages on account of the closer family relations, old-age comfort and independence for their children.