Introduction
In the contemporary era, there is a significant divergence of opinions when it comes to the question of whether or not the elderly are spending
money
on recreation Use synonyms
such
as holidays Linking Words
instead
of saving for the future generation after becoming retired. Linking Words
While
there are admittedly several drawbacks, I advocate for those who believe that the positive influences of Linking Words
this
phenomenon are more considerable.
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Body · 1
On the one hand, numerous inherent problems stem from older
people
’s expenditure on leisure activities and personal pursuits rather than preserving these funds for their children’s future. The most notable disadvantage of Use synonyms
this
trend is that it can undermine mutual understanding between family members and eventually cause them to drift apart. Linking Words
This
vulnerability arises because youth cannot rely on their parents and they have to put a heavy burden on their shoulders with a view to earning Linking Words
money
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they have a tendency to allocate an inordinate amount of Linking Words
time
to work, both at the office and at home, neglecting other family members and negatively impacting familial relationships. Use synonyms
Moreover
, considering that working Linking Words
time
constitutes approximately one-third of a person’s life, especially in the whole world that going through some sort of financial crisis, an unhealthy work-life balance renders Use synonyms
people
who do not receive the transfer of wealth from their parents more susceptible to the deterioration of both mental and physical health. Use synonyms
This
can lead to the delay of childbearing or Linking Words
give
up bearing the next generation Wrong verb form
giving
of
Change preposition
apply
them
or more importantly, these young Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
may be infertile.
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Body · 2
Nevertheless
, I am convinced that the aforementioned downsides pale in comparison with the significant upsides of the decision of retired Linking Words
people
to spend their hard-earned savings on their own leisure pursuits. Use synonyms
Chef among
the merits of Correct your spelling
Among
this
trend is the self-reliance Linking Words
for
those teenagers. Change preposition
of
This
can be attributable to the fact that knowing that there will be no inheritance, adolescents must soon learn how to be independent and engage in employment to meet their basic needs. Linking Words
Therefore
, they can get exposure to Linking Words
professional
working environment, which can educate them about determination, patience and the lesson that nothing is free. A prime example of Add an article
the professional
a professional
this
is Linking Words
a
billionaire Bill Gates, he Correct article usage
apply
not
leave any fortune to his children because he Add a missing verb
did not
want
to teach them about the value of Wrong verb form
wanted
money
earned from Use synonyms
sweet
and tears, Fix the agreement mistake
sweets
therefore
making those successors more mature and appreciate the Linking Words
labor
of other Change the spelling
labour
people
. A Use synonyms
further
point to discuss is that it may tighten the family relationship. Retired Linking Words
people
can devote their full Use synonyms
time
and energy to engaging in more vacations with their family and loved ones. Increased Use synonyms
time
together is synonymous with Use synonyms
the
more understanding between parents and children, which may gradually eliminate the generation gap existing in some families these days. Correct article usage
apply
Last
but not least, the true gain is a pleasure Linking Words
deserve
. Having Wrong verb form
deserved
undergon
years of stress and tiredness, these Correct your spelling
undergone
people
can be vulnerable to a myriad of health problems Use synonyms
such
as hearing loss, back and neck pain, or heart disease. Linking Words
An eventual
ease in life not only heals their mentality, but Remove the article
Eventual
it
can Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
encourage them to embark on more physical activities that bring joy and Linking Words
fulfillment
with a view to reducing the risk of getting these diseases.
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fulfilment
Conclusion
In conclusion,
while
it is undeniable that the decision of older Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
using
their Change the verb form
to use
money
for amusement rather than save it for their future heirs may be attributable to some drawbacks, I would contend that the advantages ultimately outweigh the disadvantages on account of the closer family relations, old-age comfort and independence for their children.Use synonyms