Now adays the population of young people is more than old people in the countries. And it benefit us To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of young people has increased in

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the rise in the

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of births in comparison with the

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of deaths.

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some would argue that

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trend would bring some issues and cause economic pressure, I do believe that its merits outweigh any other drawbacks.

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, youth are the power

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society, they are the workforce which is the base of

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development. Young skilled workers are considered to be the prominent element of any civilization,

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they carry out the mission of building and improving the local economy of nations.

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, In Egypt, a bigger percentage of the population is young,

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they are the most significant source of the economy whether they work abroad

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send their income in dollars which has

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dispensable role in helping their country, or they work in other local markets and fill the gap of employment.

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, the importance of the young population is evident.

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, senior citizens and old people are the most challenging issues in Developed Countries, they are not capable of working anymore,

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they are not considered to be an element of any production process.

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, they get benefits from the social insurance system

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as health insurance and pensions which present pressure on any form of economy.

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when the

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of youth is higher than the

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of pensioners it means that we can overcome the dilemma that arises now in Europe. In conclusion, there are a wide range of advantages that come with

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trend and if we support the voices who claim that the percentage of youth must be high, our future will be secured and will have a myriad of potential from human resources.