Now adays the population of young people is more than old people in the countries. And it benefit us To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that the population

number

of young people has increased in

this

current era

due to

the rise in the

number

of births in comparison with the

number

of deaths.

Whereas

some would argue that

this

trend would bring some issues and cause economic pressure, I do believe that its merits outweigh any other drawbacks.

Firstly

, youth are the power

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society, they are the workforce which is the base of

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development. Young skilled workers are considered to be the prominent element of any civilization,

in

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they carry out the mission of building and improving the local economy of nations.

For example

, In Egypt, a bigger percentage of the population is young,

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a result of

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they are the most significant source of the economy whether they work abroad

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send their income in dollars which has

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dispensable role in helping their country, or they work in other local markets and fill the gap of employment.

Thus

, the importance of the young population is evident.

On the other hand

, senior citizens and old people are the most challenging issues in Developed Countries, they are not capable of working anymore,

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they are not considered to be an element of any production process.

Moreover

, they get benefits from the social insurance system

such

as health insurance and pensions which present pressure on any form of economy.

Therefore

when the

number

of youth is higher than the

number

of pensioners it means that we can overcome the dilemma that arises now in Europe. In conclusion, there are a wide range of advantages that come with

this

trend and if we support the voices who claim that the percentage of youth must be high, our future will be secured and will have a myriad of potential from human resources.