The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy consumption of the UK in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy consumption of the UK in two years
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The pie charts detail the distribution of various
energy
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sources in a given nation in the years 1995 and 2005. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that
production
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of two main energies (coal and gas) rose marginally,
while
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petrol declined considerably. ‘Other’ and nuclear
production
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also
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grew greatly, despite remaining less popular in both years. In 1995, coal, gas, and petrol were roughly equal in terms of
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production
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with each slightly above 29%. By 2005, the figures for coal and gas had risen moderately (30.93% and 30.31%, respectively)
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petrol exploitation declined to represent just 19.55% of all sources. The data for the remaining categories was considerably lower with ‘other’ accounting for 4.9% of
energy
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production
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to begin
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the period and nuclear noticeably higher at 6.4%. By 2005, ‘other’ had narrowed the disparity and nearly doubled to 9.1% as nuclear
energy
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use grew more slowly to reach 10.1%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
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