There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last times you complained explain what you want the manager to do. Write about 150 words.
Respected manager,
I am a resident of Richmond Hill and a frequent visitor
of
the Change preposition
to
sport
centre on Torbram Change the noun form
sports
road
. Gyming has been my passion since Capitalize word
Road
teenage
years but good facilities are essential for a better workout which the centre has failed to provide under your management.
I have complained several times about the lack of water supply in the men's changing room. Correct pronoun usage
my teenage
Also
, a written application was given to the receptionist by the gym members. We all were assured of a positive response but no further
action has been taken.
Water supply should be fixed as most of the office going people usually take a bath in gym
in morning hours as it is convenient for them. A plumber can be assigned to look into Add an article
the gym
a gym
this
matter as the reputation of the branch can be at stake,
if corrective matters are not taken timely.
Remove the comma
apply
Your
sincerely,
HarshveerCorrect the word
Yours
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.