The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced .

The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced .
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The picture illustrates the
process
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of
juice
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production from
oranges
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. There are 17 stages in total in the
process
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of producing
juice
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.  Beginning with delivering the fresh
oranges
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to the factory and ending up with selling them in the supermarket. The  production of the
juice
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process
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commences with delivering the fresh
oranges
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to the factory by the special lorries.In the factory, there are several steps for
this
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process
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.
Firstly
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,  delivered
oranges
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washed, cleaned the orange's glume and
juice
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extracted in the machine and solid waste through
such
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animal food for the sheep or cows.  In the next step  extracted fresh milk is either  packaged for the consumers and
then
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sold in the supermarket or delivered to the evaporate firm for removal of water by the refrigerator truck . Next concentrated drinks and canned alcohol are placed warehouse. Water is added to the branch for the semi-finished products and packaged after selling to the consumer in the supermarket.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Orchard
  • Harvest
  • Processing facility
  • Quality control
  • Extraction
  • Pasteurization
  • Filtration
  • Preservatives
  • Fortification
  • Deaeration
  • Shelf life
  • Distribution
  • Bottling
  • Packaging
  • Labeling
  • Environmental impact
  • Sustainability
  • Waste management
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