The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced .
The picture illustrates the
process
of juice
production from oranges
. There are 17 stages in total in the process
of producing juice
. Beginning with delivering the fresh oranges
to the factory and ending up with selling them in the supermarket.
The production of the juice
process
commences with delivering the fresh oranges
to the factory by the special lorries.In the factory, there are several steps for this
process
. Firstly
, delivered oranges
washed, cleaned the orange's glume and juice
extracted in the machine and solid waste through such
animal food for the sheep or cows. In the next step extracted fresh milk is either packaged for the consumers and then
sold in the supermarket or delivered to the evaporate firm for removal of water by the refrigerator truck . Next concentrated drinks and canned alcohol are placed warehouse. Water is added to the branch for the semi-finished products and packaged after selling to the consumer in the supermarket.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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