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Some local languages are becoming extinct. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#languages #development
Nowadays there are many languages are dying out. I tend to think that
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 become easy to communicate.  There are several arguments to think in
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nowadays schools decide to learn
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as
second
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language
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 individuals
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 know perfect
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, if you know
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foregn
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foreign
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such
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English
 you can
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 business or work in any country
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you want.
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wich
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 not foreign
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 to communicate in other countries. It
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 that if you have
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 to
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wich
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speak
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on
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othe
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another
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 you will not
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 to understand
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 but in hotels or
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 places should stuff know
English
 and if you will know it everything will be fine. 
On the other hand
, undoubtedly extinct
language
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nation
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 and people should feel respect for their
language
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In other words
there
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are huge history was
writen
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written
by
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this
language
 and there are many individuals wich speak
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this
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.
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istorical
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historical
 place in Ukraine,
for instance
, speak on
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language
 which young
nation
 co not able to understand and they do not find reason in
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 learn
this
language
.  In conclusion, I would argue that if people
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understand each other
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easier it will be
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while
 just
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language
not
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 idea we
chould
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could
 respect our historical things and your retired
naition
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nation
nations
such
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