The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
City
hospital is located at Ring Correct article usage
The city
Road
. In 2007 the road
access
was small and the car
park
for staff and public
was in the same area.
Because of that, there was not much space for Correct article usage
the public
public
to Add an article
the public
park
their car
there. If you wanted to go there by bus
, there were 6 bus
stops near the city hospital, but the bus
had to stop in the middle of the road
, so it blocked the car
access
to the hospital. But in the past three years, the access
to the city hospital has improved so much. The staff car
park
and the public car
park
were separated, so there was more space for the public to park
their car
. The staff car
park
was located on the south part while
the public car
park
was located on the east part. They also
added a bigger bus
station next to the road
so it won’t block the car
access
to the hospital. The bus
could go to the bus
station through the roundabout.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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