Some people belive that it is good share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others belive that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

this

modern era, restricting

information

for the sake of public security and national importance seems irrational to many

while

others opine that

information

should be available only when the authority deems them suitable for access both views would be examined in

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essay. I personally believe that scientific studies, the academic arena, and

bussiness

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business

businesses

can

be

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greatly

benefied

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benefit

if the

information

is made open to them without

restrictrions

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restrictions

restriction

. The proponent of restricting sensitive

information

believe that unrestricted access to

information

could

pentrate

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penetrate

state

seucrity

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security

. lead to public outcry ,hand over

technology

to terrorists,and facilitate corporate monopoly.So

information

has to be properly

securutinized

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scrutinized

before making them public. In

this

digital era,

information

spread

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like

wild fire

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and for the sake of maintaining global peace, it should be

delimated

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delimited

eliminated

decimated

.

According to

this

group of people.

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instance

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if nuclear

technology

is shared with all

nation

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for scientific studies, the world will soon stand on the verge of

obliterartion

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obliteration

,despite the incredible

posiblity

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possibility

this

technology

possesses to facilitate the

citizens

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energy demands. On the

controrary

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contrary

, those who advocate for unobstructed access to

information

say that scientific research largely depends on available data and previous findings. If valuable

information

and past findings are not shared openly with academics and

researchs

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research

researchers

,global

progres

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progress

will become a standstill.

For instance

,the internet is probably the most significant invention the modern world has produced and if

this

technology

and not been shared by the US military. We would still be living in the pre-internet era.

Moreover

, clandestine

information

has no value if it is not

implmented

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implemented

in the real world and

thus

curbing them is like slaughtering the potential for progress. In conclusion,

information

has limited value when it is

constrined

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constrained

and not shared with great minds. For true global progress, restrictions on valuable

information

should be debarred and let people know the truth

instead

of keeping them in the dark.