Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

Obesity is

one

of the health

problem

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problems

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that massively increased recently

due to

some

caused

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that

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related

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to people

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people

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people's

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habit

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habits

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or

behavior

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behaviour

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. Even

this

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though this

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has been

worldwide

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epidemic

problem

,

however

, it still could be done through some actions and the elaboration to solve

this

matter will be covered in

this

essay.

Firstly

,

one

of

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the reason

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reason

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reasons

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people

could get over-weight is

they

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lack of activities and it

highly

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possible

happen

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to

people

who work in the office and seldom

to

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do a workout.

Secondly

, it could happen because of their bad habit,

for instance

,

late night

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dinner

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.

Hence

, these circumstances are the main reasons for

people

get

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obesity

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obese

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. Meanwhile, there

are

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is

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some research that

prove

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proves

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this

problem

also

hereditary, and

this

remains be more complicated to tackle

this

problem

. Even if

this

challenge could

be happen

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towards every

people

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person

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,

but

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there are some practices or solutions to tackle

this

.

One

of which is

people

have to be active. Active refers to how often and how long a person

do

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walking. Research

said

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people

have to walk at least 1,000 steps in a day.

Moreover

,

people

have to do exercise 2 times

in

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a week.

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activity could

generates

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body flexibility

as well as

enhances

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people

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people's

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cardio. In spite of these,

people

also

have to control their food, because some of them

are consist

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of a lot of sugar,

carbo

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carbs

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, and

also

junk food.

To conclude

, obesity is

one

of

epidemic

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the epidemic

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health

problem

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problems

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in

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apply

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global

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globally

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, and it could be worse

on

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for

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the body if

people

ignore

this

.

However

,

this

is still

cureable

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curable

and preventable as long as

people

keep their good

habit

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habits

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.