The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

been shut down. In 2011, there

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8.500 new

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that

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just newly introduced. Moving to 2012,

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that are just open in the area drastically lower compared

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2011, around 4.000

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. In 2013, in difference of 1.000 new

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introduced, making it 5.000

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in that

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. Moving forward to 2014, around 6.001 are making their grand opening in the country.

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increases the

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of new

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compared to 2014. Reaching the

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2015, there

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slightly a decreasing

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of new

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for about

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in the area.

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goes on until the

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2017. In 2018, there are a less

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of

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that are

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opening, around 3.000 in that

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.

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, there are

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that are closing in between these new opening

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. In 2011, the

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that are closed

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around 6.002. It

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2

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,

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it 6.000

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that

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down in the following

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which is 2012. Moving to 2013, there are a slightly

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of 7.001

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that

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to 2011, there is only 1 different

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of

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that are closed down in 2014, which make it 6.001

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. In 2015

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,

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only around 9.000

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that

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closed

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from

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2011 until 2018. It going up again to the

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of 5.001

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that

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closed in 2016. In 2017,

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a

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in

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from 2016

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that

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closed in 2017.

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in 2018, it

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6.001

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that

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closed down same as the

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of

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that

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shut down in 2016.

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conclude

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that there’s a bigger

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of

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that closed in the

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of 2011 until 2018 compared to the

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of

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that are just opened