The diagram below shows how the tea is produced. The also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea

The diagram below shows how the tea is produced. The also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how the tea is produced. The also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea
The figure illustrates the process of
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โ˜• manufactured and prepared for people.
It is clear that
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there are 18 distinct stages in the production of
tea
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๐Ÿต. The process begins with sowing
tea
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seeds and ends at the drinking and enjoying stages. Looking at the first ๐Ÿฅ‡ stage we can see ๐Ÿ™ˆ that the
tea
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โ˜• grows in India and China. From the second ๐Ÿฅˆ to the fifth stages of the process the
tea
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is planted, grown, picked and dried.
This
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drink
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๐Ÿต is
then
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packed into boxes ๐ŸŽ and downloaded onto a special truck ๐Ÿš›, transported to the shops. In the ninth step ๐Ÿชœ shown on the diagram, the customers bought the
tea
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and took it to their home ๐Ÿ . After that, to
drink
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๐Ÿšฐ and enjoy people had to boil water ๐Ÿ’ฆ in the kettle, put the
drink
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bag in the goblet, pour out the water ๐ŸŒŠ and wait two minutes.
Finally
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, into the bocal added the milk ๐Ÿฅ› and sugar and
then
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people can
drink
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and enjoy the
tea
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, drink with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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