The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particular university
The maps reveal information on different changes in the layout of a Biology
school
in a university as it is now and it
will be in the future.
Looking from an Correct pronoun usage
apply
overall
perspective, it is obvious that most features of the school
will alter. The main alterations will be the transformation and relocation of facilities making the school
more modern and flexible in various way
.
With regard to the north of the picture, the Fix the agreement mistake
ways
school
is planned
to place a lab and an office in the middle of the north, which will be surrounded by some trees. Wrong verb form
planning
While
the the
indoor Remove the redundancy
apply
sport
hall in the northeast, the road in the west, and the central library Change the noun form
sports
remain
Change the verb form
remains
at
the same spots, the drama Change preposition
in
center
on the right of the aforementioned library will be substituted by a music Change the spelling
centre
center
.
Turning to the south of the picture, a new car parking lot for staff will Change the spelling
centre
locate
in the southwest which is next to the end Wrong verb form
be located
the
road. Extra teaching building and lecture room will be built which is predicted to be two of each kind. Change preposition
of the
While
the former is on the left of the cafe, the latter is on another side. Finally
, the IT center
below the cafe in the southeast will be expanded to the left.Change the spelling
centre
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