The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The first graph shows the percentage of households with electrical equipment
such
as washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners from 1920 to 2019 in a single nation Linking Words
while
the second chart depicts the work that has been done per hour per week.
As shown, the proportion of Linking Words
everyday
for all the appliances have been increased between the first two decades;Replace the word
every day
whereas
the number of Linking Words
hours
per week dropped down with a steady slope from 50 Use synonyms
hours
to almost 35 Use synonyms
hours
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the rate of development of the rate of ordinary Linking Words
for
refrigerators and vacuum cleaners after 1960 Change preposition
apply
has
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
while
for washing machines rather than rising up, it went down from 1960 to 1980. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the number of Linking Words
hours
per week per household was nearly constant with a little drop between 1960 to 2019.
Use synonyms
Linking Words
Lastly
Add a comma
,Lastly
last
, the percentage of households for refrigerator and vacuum cleaner after 1980 their trend tend to be constant; Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
this
trend for washing machine has risen.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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