The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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the ratio of families in owned and rented houses accommodation in Wales and England from 1918 to 2011.

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clear from the graph that

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both countries have contrary data in each

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except in 1971.

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what is shown,

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beginning

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the ownership of households have

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figure which

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22%, the number after 21

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started to increase to 31% , after that it

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ratio for 14

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respectively, in 1961 the number graduate increased to 41% in general number regularly increased in all period till eventually his peak in 2001 to 69 per cent. in rented accommodation about households started to decrease from 77% in 1918 to 31% in 2001 respectively after that in 2011

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we could say, there is a

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relation between both figures, people in recent

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owned

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their house.