The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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bar graph depict
the ratio of families in owned and rented houses accommodation in Wales and England from 1918 to 2011. Change the verb form
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both countries have contrary data in each Remove the article
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years
except in 1971.
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According to
what is shown, in
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begning
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20-centry
the ownership of households have Correct your spelling
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tiny
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22%, the number after 21 Wrong verb form
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years
started to increase to 31% , after that it is remain
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this
ratio for 14 years
respectively, in 1961 the number graduate increased to 41% in general number regularly increased in all period till eventually his peak in 2001 to 69 per cent. in rented accommodation about households started to decrease from 77% in 1918 to 31% in 2001 respectively after that in 2011 incrased
to 36%.
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we could say, there is a sensable
relation between both figures, people in recent Correct your spelling
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their house.Change the verb
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