The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.
The bar graph
illustrate
the performance of a bus company with regards to their punctuality, both actual and goal, and the number of complaints and passengers.
Change the verb form
illustrates
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that the company lowered their standard percentage throughout the given period
, whereas
the complaints within the given period
increases
.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that the company's target percentage slowly Replace the word
increased
decreases
from 86% in 1999 and became under 85% in 2003, Wrong verb form
decreased
moreover
the actual figure off
services arriving on time Change preposition
for
experience
a fluctuation. In 1999 the portion was 85%Wrong verb form
experienced
,
before a gradual dropped by at least 82% in 2000. Remove the comma
apply
However
, on
the following year it significantly Change preposition
in
increases
, but hovered at the same level until the end Wrong verb form
increased
period
in 2003 at just under 85%
On the other hand
, the number of complaints (per thousand passenger's journeys) continued to increase within the 4 year
Add a hyphen
4-year
period
. In 1999, it was only around under 80 people, before reaching its highest point by 2003 at 120, respectively.Submitted by Anneya
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