It is better for students to study from home rather than go to school . Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

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discussion between people that
studens
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students
should
study
at school or in their
home
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.
This
writter
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totally
argee
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agrees
that
student
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students
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being
teach
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taught
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at
home
will bring more
benificial
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beneficial
than
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learning
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at
home
by
themselve
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themselves
.
Intially
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Initially
, learning at
home
can be a useful way to
study
where learners can easily look up
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information
in
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the internet.
In addition
, the internet
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many sources for students to gain knowledge and do more
excercises
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exercises
in their subject.
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a result, they can be better in many
field
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of subjects that they
had
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have
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learnt. Another salient point is that the student that
learn
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learns
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at
home
can be more independent than the one
tat
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that
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just
learn
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learns
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at school.
Due to
their schedules
that
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apply
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they have to do it correctly, they will become more mature,
can
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and can
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arrange their
study
and
relax
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time.
For instance
, there is a well-known scientist
that
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named Thomas
Eddison
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Edison
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, he had to
study
at
home
because his teacher
think
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that he did not have any talent to
study
. But he
not
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give up on his education road, he decided to learn at
home
and become a famous scientist
that
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invented one-way electronics.
To conclude
,
although
studying at
home
can have some dangerous information and it is hard to
study
without the teacher which is typical. But I believe that studying at
home
helps people to become mature and independent in the future.
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