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Write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things - Give details of your stay - Why those two things are important - How he can return the things to you

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Dear Sir, I am Lovish Kakkar. I was a guest at your hotel Crowne Plaza and just checked out of my room yesterday afternoon. I am writing
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 to inform you that I accidentally left two of my valuable belongings in my hotel room and need your assistance in their safe return to me. To give more details, I was a single occupant in
one bedroom
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 suite number 304. I checked into the hotel on 24th June and checked out of it yesterday, 26th June at around 12:30 in the afternoon to catch my flight back home.
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 leaving the place, I forgot my two most important items, my laptop and car keys somewhere in the room because I was in a hurry to catch my flight. Those two are my most valuable belongings as I need my laptop to work from home. My car is
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 parked at the airport parking and I need to bring it home as soon as possible. If you find those items, please send them to me via courier services like FedEx and I will make sure to cover the cost for it. My address is as below:28 Tandridge Crescent, Etobicoke, Ontario M9W 2P2. I hope my request will be considered and my belongings will be safely returned back to me. Thank You for your understanding. Yours Faithfully, Lovish

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coherence cohesion
Consider providing a little more clarity by directly stating in the introduction that you left items in your room without needing to read the entire paragraph.
task achievement
Check for minor grammatical errors and ensure consistency in tenses, especially in describing past actions.
coherence cohesion
Your letter is well-structured, with clear paragraphs addressing each part of the task neatly.
task achievement
You have maintained a polite and formal tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for this context.
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