Some of local languages are becoming extinct. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

In some places in the world, local lingo is going to be forgotten. I believe every
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that happens in a society, has some positive and negative aspects. In
this
essay, I would like to explain about it a little more. To commerce, when a
country
starts having a
language
for itself, its
people
can communicate much easier together.
For example
, they can have a national holiday and celebrate it
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the
country
.
Also
while
a
language
is official, and everyone knows it, job opportunities will emerge and everyone can apply for that. Like in the USA, every applicant needs to pass the IELTS exam to be able to be accepted for a study or work visa.
On the other hand
, when a
language
of a region or
country
dies out, its culture will have
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disappeared as well. In my opinion, part of a region's identity is its
language
. If
this
language
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forgotten,
people
will experience the demise of their indigenous. Iran,
for instance
, used to be a multinational
country
and every region had their own
language
but
then
the government decided to announce that we have only one
language
as an official lingo.
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actions caused the demise of some regions and their traditions which were joyful for their
people
.
To conclude
, multilingualism,
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somehow, is demanding to manage. It might be effective in job opportunities. But
on the other hand
,
language
is an identity and if it goes away
people
going to be depressed and lose their traditions.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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