Some people believe censorship is the killing of entertainment productions. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, amount of
movies
coming up
are
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crazy. Many think that censorship is one
the
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way
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ways
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which
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can regulate what to
show
on
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movies
which is
also
demolishing entertainment industries. In
this
essay, I will explain both
side
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and conclude why Censorship is important. On the one hand,
movie
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the movie
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is
way
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a way
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which reflects the existing society they
shows
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what is in real life. even though they
show
what
show
societes
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society
censor bans some sequence in
movie
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the movie
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. Removing them might take out value from the films. which might destroy the whole
movie
.
On the other hand
, there are
few
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regulation
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everyone should obey to. any
movies
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movie
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or entertainment product should harm
anyone
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emotions.
For example
, if any film hurts the religious sentiment,
then
it should be removed else
whole
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nation should face the
conseqences
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consequences
.
Moreover
,
movies
have
great
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impact on kids. if a
movie
has porn, and if
that is
not regulated
then
children who are watching
gets
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badly
effected
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affected
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from
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that.
To conclude
, Even though
movies
show
mirror to
socities
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society
, there are limits to what we can
show
in entertainment
product
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products
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. There should be
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a regualtory
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regualtory
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regulatory
body which should control and ban to keep the quality of
movies
up.
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