The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentange of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Percentange of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The pie graphs depict the
proporation
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proportion
proportions
of
water
in use for the demand of people in 3 aspects including industrial, agricultural and domestic in six regions all
aound
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around
the world. At first glance,
it is clear that
the
water
for
imigrating
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immigration
standed
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out in almost
areas
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all areas
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,
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except
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North
America
and Europe.
In addition
, there are some differences in
water
distribution in each part of the world. Looking more closely at the graphs, one can see that the share of used
water
in agriculture captured more than 80
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in
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the total
water
of the
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.
South
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America
,
similarly
,
water
which was provided for farming accounted for around
two-third
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of the total.
However
, in Europe and North
America
,
water
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in
this
field only
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32 and 39
percent
respectively. At around 50
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of
water
for industrial use, it dominated and equalled
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the percentage of two other aspects in North
America
and Europe. Meanwhile, the rest regions spent
least
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water
on
this
field, around 10
percent
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, especially 7
pecent
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per cent
and 5
percent
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respectively in Africa and Central Asia.
Finally
, the same figures in
water
used domestically were seen in all the
region
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regions
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, capturing approximately
at
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between 7 and 19
percent
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.
To sum up
, there are
the
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differences in distribution in all regions in order to be suitable for each one’s orientation in the future.
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