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In many countries paying for things using mobile phone app is becoming increasing common, Does this development have more advantages and disadvantages?

#countries #phone #app #development
Nowadays, Technology is improved.
As a result
 , millions of people choose
phone
apps
 for payments in spite of the bank. In my opinion, Operating the system can achieve more advantages.
This
 easy I will discuss, how to convenient and how to protect the money. On the one hand, in today's world people live a busy life.
Therefore
, as ,usual they are doing everything by finger trips.
For instance
, past era if somebody wanted to pay some
school
 fees, he had to go to
school
. Unfortunately, most of the parents are working weekdays.
Due to
 , there isn’t time to go to the
school
 to make payments.
Nevertheless
, at
this
 moment,
school
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the school
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 introduced some applications for making
payment
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payments
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 by
phone
 to everyone to pay on time. Because of that, above
i
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I
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 mentioned, convenience is one of the advantages fact.
On the other hand
, our money is protected from robs.
For instance
, in the past folk
handling
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handled
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 applications for payments
ones
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once
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 in a blue moon,
therefore
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in therefore
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 past era everyone had money in hand.
as
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As
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 a result all over the world faced robs problems.
However
, nowadays, most
community
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communities
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 use
phone
 applications to make reparation.
In addition
, using
the
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apply
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mobile
apps
 is becoming more popular; people’s life risk is reduced,
that
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which
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 is another advantage of
use
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using
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phone
apps
.
To conclude
, in my point of view, People
use
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who use
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 mobile
apps
for paying
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to pay
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 for things have more advantages rather than disadvantages.
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  • Contactless transactions
  • Mobile wallet
  • Biometric authentication
  • Fraud prevention
  • Digital divide
  • Cybersecurity
  • Financial inclusion
  • Spending habits
  • E-wallet
  • Encryption
  • Digital literacy
  • Payment gateway
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