In many countries paying for things using mobile phone app is becoming increasing common, Does this development have more advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, Technology is improved.
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, millions of people choose
phone
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apps
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for payments in spite of the bank. In my opinion, Operating the system can achieve more advantages.
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easy I will discuss, how to convenient and how to protect the money. On the one hand, in today's world people live a busy life.
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, as ,usual they are doing everything by finger trips.
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, past era if somebody wanted to pay some
school
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fees, he had to go to
school
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. Unfortunately, most of the parents are working weekdays.
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, there isn’t time to go to the
school
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to make payments.
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, at
this
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moment,
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school
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the school
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introduced some applications for making
payment
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payments
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by
phone
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to everyone to pay on time. Because of that, above
i
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mentioned, convenience is one of the advantages fact.
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, our money is protected from robs.
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, in the past folk
handling
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applications for payments
ones
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once
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in a blue moon,
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therefore
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in therefore
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past era everyone had money in hand.
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as
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a result all over the world faced robs problems.
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, nowadays, most
community
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communities
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use
phone
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applications to make reparation.
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, using
the
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apply
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mobile
apps
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is becoming more popular; people’s life risk is reduced,
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that
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is another advantage of
use
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using
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phone
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apps
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.
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, in my point of view, People
use
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who use
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mobile
apps
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for paying
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to pay
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for things have more advantages rather than disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contactless transactions
  • Mobile wallet
  • Biometric authentication
  • Fraud prevention
  • Digital divide
  • Cybersecurity
  • Financial inclusion
  • Spending habits
  • E-wallet
  • Encryption
  • Digital literacy
  • Payment gateway
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