The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Percentage of households with electrical appliances (1920-2019) 0 Percentage of households 100 90 80 70 60 50 40 10 0 1920 1940 - Washing machine 1960 1980 2000 2019 Year o Refrigerator ~ O- Vacuum cleaner Number of hours of housework* per week, per household (1920-2019) Number of hours per week 888888 0 1920 1940 1960 1980 2000 2019 Year -0- Hours per w
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The line graph illustrates the changes in electrical appliances namely washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners in the percentage of households per week between 1920 and 2019 in one country.
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refrigerators increased rapidly by approximately 90 per Linking Words
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, it levelled off from 1980 to 2019.
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, the changes in washing machines fluctuation for around 100 years. Roughly, the percentage of vacuum cleaners was raised gradually at the stage of 1920 to 2000. After, it remained constant at 100 per Linking Words
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, the electrical appliances gradually decreased for hours of housework per week from 1920 to 1960. Linking Words
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