The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The drawing illustrates the multi-
step
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process
of cheese products.
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, there are nine steps in the Linking Words
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of making cheese starting with the combination of raw milk and bacteria and ending with packed cheese being stored in supermarkets and shop shelves.
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begins by putting raw milk inside a huge metal container containing bacteria, after which the mixture becomes acidic and through Use synonyms
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T enzymes are formed. Followed by the solidification of the product forming it into curds, and Use synonyms
then
curds are cut into small pieces. Linking Words
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, the curds are placed inside a pot to be cooked before draining it with excess water. Linking Words
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, salt is added and passed onto the machine for shaping. Use synonyms
Following
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, the product enters a shelve where they are processed for about 2 months.
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After
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step
is completed they are sent to be packaged, after which they are ready to be placed in supermarkets and shops.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, step with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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