Discuss about the person you dislike and the causes why you detest. Also, name 3 virtues

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desirable
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or less
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desirable
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some might pretend they do not care about what
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feel about them,
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the bottom of our hearts everybody wants to be liked and
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receive
more positive attention and just like
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competetion
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competition
, there are some winners and
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some losers. Correspondingly, there has recently been a big rivalry in my company to become the worst human being ever. His name is A.
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. and by the end of
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you will know why. First of all,
people
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usually tend to show up at
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with good vibes because that will help the morale of the company and eventually, will result in better output for the company and the employee himself.
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, treating
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badly affects
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's own performance and
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, will stop his development and growth as an employee. As an example, A.
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. shows up to
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without even saying hi to his co-workers and
rarly
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rarely
even responds to what anybody's saying.
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, he never participates in corporate activities and hardly ever attends
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party
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.
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, among all the co-workers I've ever worked with,
this
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guy stands out as the most intolerable person and
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will probably cost him his job in
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future. Second of all,
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should be thoughtful of his actions because once something horrible is done, it cannot be undone. Indeed, sometimes it gets tough for someone to
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control
his anger but in the case of
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environment, no matter what happens,
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must not disrespect or even worse, have physical contact with any of his co-workers
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he might find himself in a bit of a situation.
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, A.
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. got himself in a fight with our
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colleague
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year over his usual park spot and things
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up so fast they ended up having a policeman
seperating
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separating
them. Once
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incidence
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occures
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occurs
in a workplace,
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of the two parties should go and in
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example, everybody agrees it is A.
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.
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,
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should always contain himself and never get himself into
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of troubles at
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unless he wants to be unemployed for a
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.
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Furthermore
, in the game of being a
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person, the winner always keeps his calm and forgives
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for their faults. He
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tries to be patient and listen carefully when
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are trying to communicate with him.
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, he must spread good feelings around the
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environment and lift up other
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's
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.
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, being nice to
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is not an optional attribute nowadays.
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, it is a mandatory quality
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when you are dealing with other
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everyday
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One
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should be respectful, patient and caring towards
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and only
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, we can expect to see a flourishing society. Unfortunately,
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like A.
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. will reduce the
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likelihood
of that
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in
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future.
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, we must keep working hard to make
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aware of the consequences their actions have for
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society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antipathy
  • detest
  • animosity
  • disdain
  • repugnant
  • arrogant
  • dishonest
  • reprehensible
  • estrangement
  • malicious
  • conflict
  • integrity
  • empathy
  • altruism
  • patience
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