Discuss about the person you dislike and the causes why you detest. Also, name 3 virtues
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desirable
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desirable
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others
feel about them, in
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in every
competetion
, there are some winners and Correct your spelling
competition
also
some losers. Correspondingly, there has recently been a big rivalry in my company to become the worst human being ever. His name is A.H
. and by the end of this
essay
you will know why.
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people
usually tend to show up at work
with good vibes because that will help the morale of the company and eventually, will result in better output for the company and the employee himself. Besides
, treating others
badly affects one
's own performance and hence
, will stop his development and growth as an employee. As an example, A.H
. shows up to work
without even saying hi to his co-workers and rarly
even responds to what anybody's saying. Correct your spelling
rarely
Moreover
, he never participates in corporate activities and hardly ever attends new year's
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New Year's
party
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parties
Thus
, among all the co-workers I've ever worked with, this
guy stands out as the most intolerable person and this
will probably cost him his job in near
future.
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one
should be thoughtful of his actions because once something horrible is done, it cannot be undone. Indeed, sometimes it gets tough for someone to controll
his anger but in the case of Correct your spelling
control
work
environment, no matter what happens, Correct article usage
a work
one
must not disrespect or even worse, have physical contact with any of his co-workers otherwise
he might find himself in a bit of a situation. For instance
, A.H
. got himself in a fight with our collegue
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colleague
colleagues
college
last
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seperating
them. Once Correct your spelling
separating
such
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an incidence
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one
of the two parties should go and in this
example, everybody agrees it is A.H
. In other words
, one
should always contain himself and never get himself into these kind
of troubles at Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
work
unless he wants to be unemployed for a while
.
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, in the game of being a Correct your spelling
Furthermore
likable
person, the winner always keeps his calm and forgives Change the spelling
likeable
others
for their faults. He also
tries to be patient and listen carefully when others
are trying to communicate with him. Similarly
, he must spread good feelings around the work
environment and lift up other people
's mood
.
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moods
To conclude
, being nice to others
is not an optional attribute nowadays. Instead
, it is a mandatory quality specially
when you are dealing with other Replace the word
especially
people
everyday
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every day
One
should be respectful, patient and caring towards others
and only then
, we can expect to see a flourishing society. Unfortunately, people
like A.H
. will reduce the likelyness
of that Correct your spelling
likelihood
to happen
in Change the verb form
happening
near
future. Correct article usage
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Thus
, we must keep working hard to make people
aware of the consequences their actions have for the
society.Correct article usage
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