Topic: The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that looking at one's
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phones
is Fix the agreement mistake
phone
antisocial
as smoking and so it is Rephrase
as antisocial
also
banned in certain Linking Words
places
. It is undeniable that smoking and wasting Use synonyms
a
time by looking at Correct article usage
apply
phone
has become an essential part of our life. Correct article usage
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However
, there is no absolute argument on whether both of them should be banned or limited Linking Words
at
some Change preposition
in
places
.
A commonly held belief is that even when Use synonyms
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a person
surrounded
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is surrounded
with
a lot of friends, Change preposition
by
also
spends Linking Words
a
time Correct article usage
apply
by
using Change preposition
apply
phone
. As evidence of Add an article
the phone
a phone
this
they point to nowadays there is Linking Words
increasingly
concerning problem of technology consuming our daily lives, chiefly Correct article usage
an increasingly
within
kids and teenagers, and so I believe must be battled. Change preposition
among
Furthermore
, I think that Linking Words
people
should live Use synonyms
at
the moment and not be preoccupied with their mobile Change preposition
in
phones
. Use synonyms
Thus
, the idea of banning Linking Words
phones
in certain Use synonyms
places
like clubs and restaurants can remind Use synonyms
people
that life can not be lived through the pixels of a screen.
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On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
claim that smoking is inherently antisocial and I don't think that a complete ban on Use synonyms
phones
is Use synonyms
completely
good idea. Add an article
a completely
For example
, they may mention that Linking Words
people
have made acquaintances or even friends through smoking. Use synonyms
In addition
, smokers go outside, away from most of the others, Linking Words
sharing
a cigarette with someone in Correct word choice
and sharing
this
quiet environment can be a good time to get to know someone. The explanation lies in the fact that Linking Words
phones
should not be fully banned but only strongly discouragedUse synonyms
,
since they are Remove the comma
apply
predominant
means of Correct article usage
a predominant
communications
and extremely helpful in emergency situations. Fix the agreement mistake
communication
Therefore
, Linking Words
people
should not be looking at them constantly when they go out but they should still have access to their mobile in case they need to respond quickly.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that mobile Use synonyms
phones
can be harmful in social interactions and certain Use synonyms
places
should prohibit them, Use synonyms
although
not to the point that they can not be accessed.Linking Words
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