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compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective . Comics books radio television film theatre Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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 a heated debate has been sparked about the significance of mass
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books ,television and films. To embark on,
media
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leaps and bounds that's why every person
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society
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approach
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 so, people remain
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in touch
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relevant
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media
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strenght
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strength
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 it modifies
personalities
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the personalities
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 of
society
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 advantage is that it
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 to make specific trends
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the
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society
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depicted
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prominent
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media
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 is so powerful
souce
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source
 that it can wash
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the mindsets
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 of the citizens that can tend towards
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provoke
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violence
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describing
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 image of govt or any party it can create aggressive circumstances .
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tend
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society
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world
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,
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 if they
do'nt
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don't
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sexual
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create
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an embarracing
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embarracing
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embarrassing
 impact. To recapitulate, undoubtedly mass
media
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 role
to
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society
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 huge plus points but
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