You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you with regards to your article published in the 'Myanmar Times' newspaper which described the similarity among the
town
centres across Myanmar.
However
, I completely disagree with the writer’s opinion. It is correctly mentioned in the article that the structures presented in every centre are similar, especially in the shape of the main building and General Aung San's status.
In addition
, the common facilities
such
as entertainment zones and parking areas are in the same order because all
town
centres across the country are managed by a central authority.
Nevertheless
, my
town
centre had significant differences from others as its area is reclaimed from the old park of the
town
and its architecture dates back to the 15th century.
Moreover
, its location in the hills makes it a pleasant place to spend time
for
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our local community. I would be grateful if I could arrange a guided tour for the author to explore the place with a different perspective to get more insights. Looking forward to you giving a positive response. Yours sincerely, Ella
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