Write about the following topic: Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years, more and more individuals are taking medication to treat themselves without advice from medical physicians.
This
essay disagrees it as
a positive development because Correct your spelling
is
people
might not know the underlying disease
so they might miss the best chance of finding and treating it or they might get some side
effects
from trying the medicine.
On the one hand, health problem is not a simple thing, it's possible to miss the potential causes of a simple symptom. Nowadays, people
can find information about their disease
on internet
and Correct article usage
the internet
significant
number of Change the article
a significant
the significant
people
are trusting
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trust
this
information. Although
some data related to disease
are true, most people
don't know to
differentiate incorrect information. Despite Rephrase
how to
this
, if the explanation about a health problem is correct, some people
do not use it correctly and they are just looking for the similarity of their symptoms. For example
, even highly
experienced doctor needs some investigations or cooperation from other physicians to reach the correct diagnosis, it's less likely general Correct word choice
though highly
people
can confirm their medical problems without qualified knowledge.
On the other hand
, all the
medications have different purposes and specific Correct article usage
apply
side
effects
. If people
use it in a
wrong situation, it will not be effective for the Correct article usage
the
disease
and it might bring some side
effects
. For instance
, some medications are contraindicated for hypertension patients and if they take those medications, it will worsen their hypertension symptoms.
In conclusion, people
should be caution
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cautious
of
using medicines without Change preposition
about
prescription
from doctors since they can't confirm what kind of health problem they have and the medication might not Correct article usage
a prescription
working
and give unwanted Wrong verb form
work
side
effects
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