The picture shows many stages of water cycle. This process involves 3 main steps, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the earth.

The picture shows many stages of
water
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the water
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cycle.
This
process involves 3 main steps, which is the continuous movement of
water
on, above and below the surface of the earth. 
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a big and tidy process. The picture illustrates
water
which passes from
ocean
to air which transformed into other natural processes. One of the main steps is how condensing
water
vapor
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, which
include
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80
precent
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per cent
of
ocean
water
transformed
to
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a cloud.
After
this
,
the next step is
precipitation as rain or snow. The
last
main step is about how waterfalls take different ways.
For example
, it may fall into
lake
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,
then
return to the
ocean
. Or the rain may flow through the ground to
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impevlous
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impervious
layer.
Salt
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water
intrusion
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place before
ground
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groundwater
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water
flow into the
ocean
and
after
this
whole cycle is completed. So
water
cycle is multi-stage, which
include
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different types of natural phenomena.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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