The line grath compares the amount of books borrowed in June, July, August and September in 2014 from four rural libraries, and pie chart illustrates percentage of books, by sort, wich were adopted during that time.

The line grath compares the amount of books borrowed in June, July, August and September in 2014 from four rural libraries, and pie chart illustrates percentage of books, by sort, wich were adopted during that time.
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The line graph outlines the
number
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

of
books
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rented from rural
libraries
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in four months of 2014, and the
piechart
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pie chart

The word piechart doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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shows the data on
variety
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a variety
the variety

The noun phrase variety seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of
janres
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genres
janes

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according to
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the preference of people from these
libraries
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. In general, the
number
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of publications borrowed fluctuated over the period.
Also
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costs to mention that fiction class took a stable popularity among readers. As it is presented, the highest
number
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of
books
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taken, precisely 300 items, were from Ryeship
libraries
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in June 2014. 250
books
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were rented from Sutton Wood exactly at that time, which is
on
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in

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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the
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apply

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second place. West Eaton and Churchmount used to provide
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an equal

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equal
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an equal

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number
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of
books
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

which is 50 items to their book lovers in June 2014.
Interesingly
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Interestingly

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, the
number
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of
books
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subscribers rented from Ryeslip
libraries
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declined steadily over the next months and ended up with just over 150 in September of that year. The most
fluctuationg
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fluctuating

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pattern
observed
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was observed

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for Sutton Wood library,
however
Linking Words

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in September it reached the highest
number
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of borrowers who ordered 300
books
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,
it
Correct pronoun usage
which

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is almost double more than from other
centers
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centres

The spelling of centers is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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.
The
Correct article usage
A

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similar lending trend showed Church Mount and West Eaton, they gave for the rent 150
books
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in September 2014. It is obvious, that fiction was borrowed by most of the readers, we can see that 40% of the rented printed works
falls
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fall

The verb falls does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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into
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

category. The ratio for history and science classification accounted for 14% each and that was 5% lower than for biography category.
Interesengly
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Interestingly

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, the percentage for self-help was exactly 10% of the pie, it was the least chosen type of
janre
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jane
genre

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for the
subscibers
Correct your spelling
subscribers

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of village
libraries
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, books, libraries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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