The graph below shows the population figures of different types of wild birds in the one country between 1970 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the population figures of different types of wild birds in the one country between 1970 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the
number
of four different groups of wild bird populations in
the
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one country from 1975 and 2020. The four different groups were coastal, woodland, farmland and all
species
. After a brief climb from 110 thousand birds in 1975, the figures for all types of wild birds declined by around 20,000, except for the 20
species
of coastal birds rose gradually from 110,000 to 140,000 from 1975 to 1993 and maintained at around 135,000 until 2020. The
number
of all
species
and woodland
species
fluctuated in the group from 100,000 to 115,000 from 1975 to 1995.
Then
, all
species
grew gradually back to 110,000
whereas
woodland
species
merely rose to 90,000. The
number
of farmland
species
population dropped significantly to hit the bottom of the graph from 110,000 to 60,000 from 1975 to 2001 and kept at approximately 55,000 until 2020.
Overall
, from 1975 to 2020, coastal
species
showed an upward trend
whereas
woodland and farmland dropped downward.
In addition
,
although
all
species
fluctuated in
this
period of time, the
number
roughly remained the same.
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