The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram dispites the
production
of forzen
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frozen
fish
pies. Overall
, It can bee
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be
seen
that there are 3 main stages to complete for Add the auxiliary verb
is seen
whole
Add an article
the whole
production
, and the manufacturing proceidure
used two main Correct your spelling
procedure
procedures
intigrents
to get Correct your spelling
interests
final
product namely Potatoes and fresh Correct article usage
the final
salmon
.
The first digagram
shows how potatoes are Correct your spelling
diagram
invoved
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involved
with
the Change preposition
in
production
of fish
pies. Initially
, potatoes are stored for alomost
one month before they are ready to be processed. Once the main intigrent added to the Correct your spelling
almost
production
line, it get
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gets
cleaning
, Wrong verb form
cleaned
peeling
and sliced Wrong verb form
peeled
in to
small Join the words
into
peaces
by using Correct your spelling
pieces
knife
. Afterwords, potato slices are Add an article
a knife
the knife
boile
through Correct your spelling
boiled
boiler
boiler
and cooled for some time.In the first Add an article
the boiler
satge
of making Correct your spelling
stage
fish
pies, chilled potato slices are moved in to store container.
Secondly
, the other main material, fresh salmon
processed for the
pie Correct article usage
apply
production
. During the
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apply
this
processed, fresh salomn
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salmon
salon
covered
with lemon Add a missing verb
is covered
juise
, Correct your spelling
juice
salt
, after that, seasoned Correct word choice
and salt
salmon
are putting
Wrong verb form
put
in to
Join the words
into
oven
and steamed. Once Add an article
the oven
salmon
got
soft skins and bones are removed by Wrong verb form
gets
labros
and moved on to inspect them. Correct your spelling
labourers
Next,
the fish
is mixed with cooked peas and sauce. Final
step is potato slices are mixed with Add an article
The final
fish
, contuniuing this
mixture will wrapped Capitalize word
This
and
freezed Correct word choice
apply
them
and Correct pronoun usage
apply
store
for dispatch.Wrong verb form
stored
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, fish, salmon with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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