The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram illustrates the
production
of frozen
fish
pies.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are 16 stages to complete the whole
production
, and the manufacturing procedure used two main integrates to get the final product namely Potatoes and fresh
salmon
. The first diagram shows how potatoes are involved in the
production
of
fish
pies.
Initially
, potatoes are stored for almost one month before they are ready to be processed. Once the main ingredient is added to the
production
line, cleaning, peeling, and slicing into small pieces stages are done sequentially.Afterwards, potato slices are boiled in a boiler and cooled for some time. In the first stage of making
fish
pies, chilled potato slices are moved into a store container.
Secondly
, the other main material, fresh
salmon
processed for pie manufacturing. During
this
process, fresh
salmon
is covered with lemon juice and salt, after that, seasoned salmons are put into the oven for steam.Once
salmon
have soft skins and bones are removed by using manpower and moved on to inspect them.
Next,
the
fish
is mixed with cooked peas and sauce. The final step is potato slices are mixed with
fish
, continuing,
this
mixture will wrap, and freeze them and stored for dispatch.
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