The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country

The chart illustrates the information about recycling four kinds of material during

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the 28-year

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period from 1982 to 2010 in a specific country. There was a dramatic increase in recycling

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the others

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unsteady. The unit here is

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a percentage

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.

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, the recycling

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of Glass containers

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and aluminium

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cans saw an upward trend,

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Paper and cardboard rose slightly at first and decreased and fluctuated.

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, despite seeing a decrease, Paper and cardboard still showed the highest

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than any other materials through the time frame. Plastics remained stable between 1982 and 2010. Looking at the

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of Paper and cardboard, it increased unsteadily from 65% in 1982

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to exactly 80% in 1990, but

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decreased substantially down to 70% in 2010.

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, Glass containers

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saw a sizeable decrease but had increased most of the time. Decreased from 50% in 1982, down to 40% in 1990, before

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moderately to 60% in 2010. Moving on to the recycling

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of

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cans, began at nearly 5% in 1986,

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increased dramatically and reached

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peak

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% in 2010.

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cans had a lightning speed, Plastics

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more steady,

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at approximately 3%, it gradually

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to about 8% in 2010.