Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere? Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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achievements in different domains

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as industry, agriculture, economy and culture and up to now the most prominent success of

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technology

. It not only helps people open

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new page of their lives but

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outside the universe.

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technology

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society now and every individual should approach it as soon as possible. That’s why many students these days should study

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computer

science.

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, we have to acknowledge that the

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of

technology

especially

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have contributed

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the development of society. Through that, it helps us store much information about

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history and culture. It is

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the best

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accommodation

for everyone to study and research.

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, if the children can use

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fluently, it could be a premise for them to develop their careers in the future and if they can

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to

computer

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from when they are kids to the time when they are grow up, during

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long time, they will be developed and level up themselves. Everyone else if they have a chance to follow the internet through

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, they will

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catch up with the trend nowadays. They

also

have a chance to contact

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everybody around the world and

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to

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comprehensive education from many countries, so the key that

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to

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successful door is

computer

education.

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reason, every child

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a chance to study with

computer

from now.

Finally

, every parent should admit the benefits of

technology

that brings to their children and they should make some conditions for them to approach

technology

right now.