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Some people think that university students should study wthatever they like. Others blieve that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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In the present day, some individuals believe that university students should
study
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subjects
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 that they want to learn,
whereas
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 other
people
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 are of the opinion that they ought to only engage in studying the field of
science
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 or
technology
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, which is expected to improve our society in the future.
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 essay will discuss both viewpoints and personally, I support the former opinion because I consider that
subjects
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 related to
science
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 and
technology
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 are not the only things supporting our economy. On the one hand, it is certainly true that
science
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 and
technology
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 have improved our quality of life in recent decades.
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,
technology
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 has allowed means of communication to evolve with modernization. Half a century ago,
people
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 kept in touch with someone by using letters, but in modern times,
people
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 can communicate with smartphones, benefiting from the development of the Internet.
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, some
people
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 anticipate that if the majority of young
people
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 studied
technology
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, they would provide a significant development for our society in the future.
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, there is the opinion that university students should
study
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 their preferred
subjects
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. First of all, as individuals have strengths and weaknesses in their abilities, they should focus on
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 that they are good at rather than be compelled to
study
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 fields in which they are not interested.
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,
subjects
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 that seem unpractical are
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 necessary because,
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, philosophy or ethics help us think about how to use
technology
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 properly. In conclusion, I would say that
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 the field of
technology
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 or
science
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 has enhanced our lives, students should
study
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 a variety of
subjects
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. I believe that not only
technology
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 or
science
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 but
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 a tremendous variety of disciplines contributed to the development of our societies.
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