the chart below shows the percantage change in the share of international students among university graduates in diffrent canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

the chart below shows the percantage change in the share of international students among university graduates in diffrent canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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provinces between 2001 and 2006. The
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,years and names of provinces.
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,province -New Brunswick. New Brunswick in 2006 had 12
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of international graduates,and 12
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. But in 2001 it had only 6
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2 times in 5 years. Nova Scotia had 10,5
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in 2006 and 5,5 in 2001. Quebec had 8
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Newfoundland and Labrador had the same
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conclude, in 2006
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more international graduates than in 2001,with
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