The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates information about
city
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population
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in Asian
countries
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namely the
Philippines
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, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia in terms of percentages in the years 1970 and 2020, and with future predictions during a decade from 2030 to 2040. It is clearly seen that in the
Philippines
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there were more people who were residents of urban parts than other three
countries
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while
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the Indonesians were unlikely to live in cities than in other given
countries
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at the beginning of the period. In detail, at the outset of the period, the
city
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population
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of Indonesia and Thailand consisted of about 14% and 19% of the total
population
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respectively,
whereas
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in Malaysia and the
Philippines
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, living cities were by far the most popular approximately 31% and 33%. Until 2010, there were fluctuations in the
Philippines
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's
city
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population
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and it witnessed a slight decrease of roughly 43%.
Nevertheless
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, the other three
countries
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went through only increases till 2010. In 2020, half residents of Indonesia lived in urban areas, surpassing the
city
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populations of Thailand and the
Philippines
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.
However
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, the majority of Malaysians were accustomed to living in the
city
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and in 2020 only about a quarter per cent of the
population
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lived in rural areas.
According to
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the future, there will be only rises in all Asian
countries
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. Interestingly, in Malaysia, only 10% of people will be living in the countryside.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, population, countries, philippines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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