The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
The first bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of Use synonyms
computer
Use synonyms
ownership
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in
2002 to 2010. Change preposition
from
Linking Words
While the
second bar chart gives information about the Correct word choice
The
percentage
of Use synonyms
computer
Use synonyms
ownership
by Use synonyms
education
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level
in 2002 and 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
,there was an increase in the Linking Words
percentage
Use synonyms
through
Change preposition
over
years
and there Correct article usage
the years
were
more use in every Change the verb form
was
education
Use synonyms
level
in 2010 than Use synonyms
2002
. Change preposition
in 2002
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
most
Correct word choice
highest
percentage
of Use synonyms
computer
usage in Use synonyms
education
was postgraduate qualification, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
least
Correct word choice
lowest
percentage
was no high school diploma.
The Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
computer
Use synonyms
ownership
began at about 50 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
in 2002 and slightly increased to approximately 75 Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
percent
in 2010. Which increased Change the spelling
per cent
about
Change preposition
by about
one fourth
in an Add a hyphen
one-fourth
8 year
period.
In 2002, Add a hyphen
8-year
computer
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ownership
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in
every Change preposition
at
education
Use synonyms
level
was about 25 Use synonyms
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percent
less than in 2010. The most increased in Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
education
Correct article usage
the education
level
category was no high school diploma. Which increased more than twiceUse synonyms
itself
. From about 15 Correct pronoun usage
apply
Use synonyms
percent
in 2002 to around 35 Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
percent
in 2010.Change the spelling
per cent
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