IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.
The line graph compares, the percentage of tourists to England who visited the
Art
Gallery
,
Pavilion
,
Pier
and Festival in Brighton from the
year
1980 to 2010. To summarize, in the given period, the proportion of tourists who visited the
Pavilion
stood first followed by the Festival,
Pier
and the
Art
Gallery
. In the
year
1980, the number of people who came to visit the Festival was 30%
while
24% and 20% paid a visit to the
Pavilion
and the
Art
Gallery
.
Therefore
, the proportion of
Pier
was 10%. Till the
year
1985, the population increased slowly in all four tourist places,
whereas
in
Pavilion
, it was rapidly processed to 48% and
also
in Festival it ranges constantly till the
year
2010.
Further
, the
Art
Gallery
and
Pier
declined in the next few years and later raised with the same ratio since 2005.
On the contrary
, in the
year
2010, the percentage reduced in the
Art
Gallery
and
Pavilion
by 9% and 31% respectively, but the
Pier
increased to 22%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery, pavilion, pier, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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