IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.
The line graph compares, the percentage of tourists to England who visited the
Art
Gallery
, Pavilion
, Pier
and Festival in Brighton from the year
1980 to 2010.
To summarize, in the given period, the proportion of tourists who visited the Pavilion
stood first followed by the Festival, Pier
and the Art
Gallery
.
In the year
1980, the number of people who came to visit the Festival was 30% while
24% and 20% paid a visit to the Pavilion
and the Art
Gallery
. Therefore
, the proportion of Pier
was 10%. Till the year
1985, the population increased slowly in all four tourist places, whereas
in Pavilion
, it was rapidly processed to 48% and also
in Festival it ranges constantly till the year
2010. Further
, the Art
Gallery
and Pier
declined in the next few years and later raised with the same ratio since 2005. On the contrary
, in the year
2010, the percentage reduced in the Art
Gallery
and Pavilion
by 9% and 31% respectively, but the Pier
increased to 22%.Submitted by gs250485 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery, pavilion, pier, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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