he diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The given pictures illustrate the location of the Eiffel
Tower
in Paris and the planned project to add many facilities in its underground. Overall
, we can see from the map, that Eiffle
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Eiffel
Tower
is strategically located in the centre of Paris, and the underground will be extended into five-storey facilities with lifts and glass ceilings.
Looking at the pictures in more detail, the Eiffel Tower
is located nearby from many other famous buildings in Paris such
as museums and hotels. It is outlined that there will be five floors in the Eiffel Tower
underground.
The first level will be allocated for a ticket office and access to the tower
. There will be many shops and restaurants on the second level, where visitors can access them by lift. After that, the third level will be allocated for the Cinema and Museum, whereas
, the fourth and fifth levels will be built for a parking facilitySubmitted by irarahmawati.polkesma on
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