The table below shows the income and jobs generated last year by tourism in Canadian states and territories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the income and jobs generated last year by tourism in Canadian states and territories.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts how much Canadian
tourism
earned and produced occupations
last
year. It was noticeable how the profit numbers skyrocketed in
Ontario
to $226.781M(million) compared to earnings in Quebec, British Columbia and Alberta at $53.570M, $49.130M, and $30.630M respectively. The sum of income from the
tourism
business was
further
reduced in Nova Scotia, Saskatchewan, New Brunswick, Newfoundland, Territories, and Prince Edward Island, which ranged between 6.830M and 14.700M. There was a positive correlation between earnings and job availability in all locations. It is obvious that the figure for job opportunities in
Ontario
was considerably higher than in the rest of the Canadian provinces and territories (226.781
Jobs
). The number of created
jobs
was substantial in Quebec, British Colombia, and Alberta following
Ontario
as shown on the table of their earned income. Unfortunately, the amount of work available is certainly lower in Nova Scotia, Saskatchewan, New Brunswick, Newfoundland and Prince Edward Island. In summary, based on the data, we can see that the total created income
as well as
the
jobs
through the
tourism
industries was dominated by
Ontario
. We
also
can conclude, that making money and
jobs
from
tourism
in Quebec, British Columbia and Alberta has been kept in the middle ranking and the figure for the rest of Canada remained the lowest standing for
last
year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourism, ontario, m, jobs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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