Your company has sent you on a three-month course in another country. The course is coming to an end, but you would like to prolong your stay. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -describe how the course benefited you -explain why you would like to delay your return -suggest a date when you would like to come back.

Hello Mr. John, I am writing
this
letter in regard to extending my stay in Canada after my Italian cuisine
course
comes to an end on 15th September 2023. First and foremost, thank you for giving me
such
a great opportunity to learn new skills and explore different countries.
While
pursuing
this
course
I learnt different methods to prepare one dish. Not only
this
but
also
came to know about various types of spices which not only enhance the taste of the food but are
also
beneficial for health. As you already know that
course
is about to end but I would like to stay some more days to learn Chinese cuisine as well which will not only help me but
also
benefit our company in their sales. So the
course
I am going to take is for one month, from 12th September to 12th October.
Hence
, I will be there around 14th October to continue my employment. Looking for a quick response so that I can register myself in next month's batch. Yours sincerely, Kulwinder Kaur
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task response
Expand on the benefits of the course in more detail.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure a more appropriate and professional greeting and closing for a letter to a manager.

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