Education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most governments spend much to educate the young. But despite
this
effort, there are often Linking Words
adults
in each Use synonyms
country
who remain illiterate. Use synonyms
Thus
, some believe that educating these Linking Words
people
should be an even bigger priority, prompting a suggestion that more money should be spent on them. In my view, Use synonyms
while
governments should help uneducated Linking Words
adults
, they should not be considered the priority. Use synonyms
To begin
with, the percentage of young Linking Words
people
in each Use synonyms
country
is significantly greater than the percentage of illiterate Use synonyms
adults
. So it makes more economic sense to continue spending more for the youth so the Use synonyms
country
can have higher returns. The youth are the future Use synonyms
laborers
, entrepreneurs, and leaders, so it is just right to spend on them. The uneducated Change the spelling
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adults
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however
, are the minority. So it is unwise to give them a much higher budget. Linking Words
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although
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adults
might not have wanted to become illiterate, they still chose to stay that way Use synonyms
instead
of finding ways to learn how to read and write. Linking Words
On the contrary
, young Linking Words
people
have not made that choice. So the possibility of them becoming the best version of themselves is there, making them a better investment. Now, it is often the case that Use synonyms
iliterate
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illiterate
adults
are those doing menial jobs or possibly living a life of crime. So it makes sense for the government to help so they can become more productive members of society. Though they should be given attention, these Use synonyms
adults
should not be prioritized nor receive more funding than the youth. In conclusion, young Use synonyms
people
have more potential, so it would be foolish for a Use synonyms
country
to focus on a few uneducated Use synonyms
adults
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Therefore
, governments should still find ways to help Linking Words
such
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adults
, but never at the expense of the next generation.Use synonyms
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