The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. RITI u sho rite a It is the Write at least 150 words. give no Nr Norbiton industrial area now Farmland Town = Factory Planned future development ) Farmland River Playground Town Shops School Medical centre
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The maps illustrate the
plan
to establish of industrial area in the future by the site of Norbiton in town. Use synonyms
Overall
, they planned to modify the factories into housing. Linking Words
Thus
, they made a decision to construct more roads.
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To begin
with, in the centre of the town , there is a rounder board in both industrial plans. Linking Words
However
, they Linking Words
plan
to build the north and northwest sides. Use synonyms
Moreover
, along the north , a path was built through the river in farmland. Linking Words
Next,
surrounding a rounder board they are planned to build shops , medicals, and more housing. Linking Words
Also
end of the east side of the path there is a school and on both sides are built housing as we as a playground, which is located in the center part of the path.
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Furthermore
, both maps have farmland across the river Linking Words
as well as
a town which is located in the west. On average, they Linking Words
plan
to construct another tiny roundabout below the main one. Truthfully, they will have a better Use synonyms
plan
to create more housing rather than the factory.Use synonyms
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