The bar graph shows the number of man and woman participants in the olympics between 1924 to 2012
The bar graph shows the number of
men
and women
participants in the Olympics.
As is presented, we can see that each bar graph indicates the difference between the men
number and women
from 1924-2012.
According to
what is shown in the bar graph, you can see the difference between the proportion of women
and men
in different years, begins with the year 1924 the rate of men
was higher than the women
rates, later on at 1952 the male rate increases to 4300 and the woman rate start to rise to reach to 500.
Now let’s move on to the next year's rates between 1984 and 2012 In the year 1984 the men
's rates kept on increasing reaching more than 5000 but the women
a surge reaching 1500.Submitted by Aziz
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