The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures below illustrate a number of important changes that will happen in the industrial region of Norbiton town in the
future
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the industrial zone in that city will convert to a residential location. It is planned that several housing will be built
instead
of factories and they will completely disappear in the
future
plan. Looking at the map of Norbiton town as it is now, there are several numbers of factories around the main
square
and
also
the
road
which is located in the east of that.
However
, in the
future
shops and a medical centre will be built
instead
of them in the south of the main
square
.
Also
, a bridge will be constructed on the river which connects the farmland and the
future
planned site.
According to
the second map, most of the factories located in the north of the
square
and eastern
road
will be replaced with housing. As well, the playground and school will be built below the river and the east of the
road
, respectively.
Finally
, there will be a small
square
to connect the
road
below the map to it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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