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Topic: Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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People hold conflicting views about whether authorities should allocate a part of the national budget to restore several languages on the verge of disappearance or not.
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 a large number of people believe that it is necessary, I would argue that
language
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 has not only a communication value but
also
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 spiritual factors. On the one hand, there are several reasons why some advocates suppose it is unnecessary to keep an extinct
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.
Firstly
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, minority languages have not been used widely in daily life. If the authorities intend to restore it, an immense budget is allocated to encourage learners,
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however
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 there is no guarantee that the
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 be preserved permanently.
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, it is likely better to have a national
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, which could destroy barriers
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 communication
amongst
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 inhabitants.
On the other hand
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, I firmly hold the view that
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 reflects the cultural
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customs
value
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values
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 of a
community
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. Each nation has a different culture and tradition, which creates special characteristics, and
language
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 is a method to convey their customs to others.
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, possessing a own
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could foster patriotism and
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 cohesion. The Chinese
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 is
such
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 an example.
Although
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 they have immigrated to the US for a long time, they strive to keep their mother
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 and teach their descendants to speak at home
instead
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 of English. Thanks to it, their culture and tradition
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 not blended
to
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 other countries. In conclusion, minority languages deserve to
preserve
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 and
develop
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developed
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 because they bring
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spiritual value
of
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 the specific
community
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