The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.
The drawing depicts how a simple
water
filter is made and how it operates to make a
drinkable Remove the article
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water
.
Overall
, there are four steps in the process of producing clean drinking water
, starting with the pouring of water
into a barrel and ending with a byproduct of clean water
.
This
process begins by pouring a gallon of non-drinkable water
inside a huge storage
drum and closing it with the help of a plastic lid. Inside the ,
drum there are 3 layers of sediments, which the poured Remove the comma
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water
needs to pass through. Firstly
, it comes in contact with the sand, then
it seeps down through the charcoal and lastly
, it passes through the gravel. After, this
process the water
then
flows out through a connecting tube going to the storage
drum.
Finally
, the processed water
that goes into the storage
drum is considered clean drinkable water
. The storage
drum has a spigot where a glass can be put to catch the clean water
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