The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.
The drawing depicts how a simple
water
filter is made and how it operates to make
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drinkable
water
.
Overall
, there are four steps in the process of producing clean drinking
water
, starting with the pouring of
water
into a barrel and ending with a byproduct of clean
water
.
This
process begins by pouring a gallon of non-drinkable
water
inside a huge
storage
drum and closing it with the help of a plastic lid. Inside the
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drum there are 3 layers of sediments, which the poured
water
needs to pass through.
Firstly
, it comes in contact with the sand,
then
it seeps down through the charcoal and
lastly
, it passes through the gravel. After,
this
process the
water
then
flows out through a connecting tube going to the
storage
drum. 
Finally
, the processed
water
that goes into the
storage
drum is considered clean drinkable
water
. The
storage
drum has a spigot where a glass can be put to catch the clean
water
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, storage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gravel
  • sand
  • activated charcoal
  • particulates
  • contaminants
  • debris
  • impurities
  • sequentially
  • absorbs odors
  • improves taste
  • clean container
  • reservoir
  • gravity
  • filtration layers
  • cylindrical
  • collected
  • drinking water
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