It is not necessary for people to travel to other places and learn about their culture. We can learn as much as from books, film and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is argued that people often visit various
places
to learn about their cultural activities rather than learning from already written cover books, movies and broadcasting media. In my opinion, I completely agree that travelling to places
to learn new things would result in broader knowledge gathering and it would provide a better opportunity to see the world
from a different view.
On the one hand, Everyone loves to travel to new places
to meet new people and learn about their culture which sometimes can be an entertaining activity. Visiting some prominent countries can be a great process that can result in improving the cognitive part of our brain by grasping the variant activities performed by them. For Instance
, sometimes people would love to visit Ooty where the dance called "Baduga" will be performed and newcomers can actively participate and learn some dance steps too. However
, learning by actually seeing things will help enhance our vision from a different perspective.
On the other hand
, we are trapped in a fast-growing world
where we do not find some relaxing time to enjoy ourselves. As we are supposed to see the world
from a single window, travel to some favourite places
will help us in easing our mental health. For example
, a recent study found that professionals who work in IT firms are completely occupied in their routine work with targeted deliverables. so commuting to relaxed greenish places
for vacation can help them by seeing the world
differently from their sedentary lifestyle and can aid in reducing stress levels.
In conclusion, Travelling is a much-needed space for everyone, where they can roam around the world
and spend some quality time with friends or family which will definitely show a sign of improvement in their Intelligence and also
it will help in opening up the opportunity window for an expedition.Submitted by chandralekha1993 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite